The Dream's Party
Ladies and Gentlemans, we want you to know, that we are going to celebrate a benefic party, "The Dream".
We have been thinking, and it is going to be celebrated to collect money for the children from the third world.
The place will be decorated with clouds, rainbows, and everything necessary to seem as if we were in heaven, where people go when they are dreaming or just asleep. We, will offer you a cocktail,and then there will be a dance.
The organizators have thought that it would be a good way to collect money, because with all the money, we will construct schools ande well prepared areas for the poor children, who can't pay for a good school, or just for an intermediate education.
We want there as many people as possible.
Thank you for your colaboration.
The Dream's organization.
Well done Estefanie! Continue working like this! I would like you to write something on your blog every day. Here are my corrections:
ReplyDeleteThe Dream('s) Party
Ladies and Gentlemans, we want you to know, that we are going to celebrate a (benefic)BENEFIT party, "The Dream".
We have (been thinking, and)DECIDED THAT it is going to be celebrated to collect money for the children from the third world.
The place will be decorated with clouds, rainbows, and everything necessary to MAKE IT seem as if we were in heaven, where people go when they are dreaming or just asleep. We, will offer you a cocktail, and then there will be a dance.
The (organizators)ORGANIZERS have thought that it would be a good way to collect money, because with all the money, we will construct schools and well-prepared areas for the poor children, who can't pay for a good school, or just for a(n intermediate) BASIC education.
We want there TO BE as many people as possible.
Thank you for your colLaboration.
The Dream's organization.